Going to university is thought by many to be the best way to secure a good jab, on the other hand, some people think that getting work experience and getting a skill is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that many people believe that continuing higher education is an effective way of gaining more skills and opportunities , whereas others think that gaining experience and practical skills could be more better in the long run. This essay agrees with this because in some cases it is not needed to go to university to get a perfect job.
there are some that hold the view that professional jobs require university level knowledge and understanding, they usually have a idea that employer consider university graduates as a valuable human resource. For instance, when someone goes for an interview for a job as a lawyer in a law firm, that person would need to have a completed Law degree and have spent time in that field.
In addition to that the quality and ranking of the university they studied would be a major factor in whether they would get the job they desire. Many employers see this fact into consideration.
On the other hand , others would argue that not all companies do not need to a university degree to have employment security. I strongly agree with this because certain jobs could be done by using some practical skills and hands-on experience. For example, designing websites or being a software programmer would require a person to be able to think for themselves, be innovative and have technical experience. Therefore, not at all jobs need people to continue their higher education at university. I think that if someone has the experience necessary and aims for a job that does not require higher education., they should take the opportunity rather than spending four years at college.
In conclusion, even though there are differing views on the best way of gaining employment , I believe that in certain fields , practical skills and experience would give someone a much better chance of getting their wanted job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 311.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99035369775 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7511448864 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2427155777 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 4.34317383033 257% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220398268786 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838837968249 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056027066281 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134077792607 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761076478613 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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