The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given graph compares the emission of CO2 per person between four countries over a time period of 40 years i.e. from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, the emission of CO2 increased over the years in Portugal and Italy whereas despite some fluctuations United kingdom and Sweden showed an overall decrement in emission.
Although the United Kingdom showed a reduction of almost 2 metric tonnes but it still remains on top of the chart each year with only Sweden coming close in the year 1977 with its maximum emission of almost 11 metric tones but after that, it keeps on reducing and with a decrement of just over 6 metric tonnes achieved the lowest emission of CO2 among these 4 countries in the year 2007.
Italy and Portugal showed a similar pattern of continuous increase with some ups and downs. Starting from 4.6 metric tonnes initially, Italy showed a higher rate till 1977 but managed to control it and restricted the emission to 7 metric tonnes in 2007 on the other side Portugal depict a steady rate of increment but suddenly rose from just above 2 to 5 metric tonnes, however, the rate slowed down in last 10 years.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Portugal) must be used with a third-person verb: 'depicts'.
Suggestion: depicts
...nnes in 2007 on the other side Portugal depict a steady rate of increment but suddenly...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33283588208 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550505050505 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.044903437 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.4 76.5299724578 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.6 16.8248392259 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202919175357 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129410998075 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584322761812 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1454241963 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551599568325 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 8.37731958763 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 7.45979381443 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Portugal) must be used with a third-person verb: 'depicts'.
Suggestion: depicts
...nnes in 2007 on the other side Portugal depict a steady rate of increment but suddenly...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 32.9175257732 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33283588208 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550505050505 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.044903437 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.4 76.5299724578 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.6 16.8248392259 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202919175357 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129410998075 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584322761812 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1454241963 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551599568325 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 8.37731958763 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 7.45979381443 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.