The line graph details data on average carbonic acid gases that each person can have in four different countries from 1967 to 2007
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in the amount of CO2 emissions per person in both Portugal and Italy while the United Kingdom and Sweden saw a decrease over the period in question.
Looking at the details, as regards Sweden, CO2 emissions started about 9 metric tonnes in 1967 and this figure reached a peak just about 10 metric tonnes in 1977. After that, this figure has decreased significantly over the last three decades and levelled off at just below 6 metric tonnes in 2007. Similarly in United Kingdom, the amount of CO2 acid gasses saw a steady decrease which remained about 11 metric tonnes in 1967 and declined to about 9 in 2007.
By contrast, in Italy CO2 emissions for each person starting at just over 4 metric tonnes, this trend increased dramatically and reached almost 8 metric tonnes in 2007. As regards Portugal average carbon dioxide emissions per person has increased sharply over period in question and remained the same with Sweden in 2007.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 67
- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant 79
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is to a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... at just below 6 metric tonnes in 2007. Similarly in United Kingdom, the amount of CO2 ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, similarly, so, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83673469388 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31124138391 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4388264879 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 76.5299724578 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253626948389 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138857590407 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845658247161 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172186830482 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049143311148 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 8.37731958763 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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