In general, human life is always occupied by many different kinds of emotion as a way to express feelings. There is one of the most positive emotions that would be fundamental for humans such as happiness. although this emotion is abstract, it can be achieved in so many ways. This essay will explain those reasons in some examples.
Happiness is part of emotion so that it cannot be described. However, it represents a positive feeling that could be known by looking at human expression. Some people have a different meaning of happiness with others due to there are many kinds of completion to gain this emotion. For instance, middle-income people will feel happy because they can fulfill their basic needs every day, while the CEO of the company will feel this emotion because they gain profit in their business.
On the other hand, there are many kinds of necessary factors to achieve happiness. First of all, due to happiness is part of positive emotion, people who want to achieve this goal can manage their daily life to keep in full of motivation and positive thinking. Furthermore, this condition can be managed by making how to-do-list with some targets in daily life. For instance, if some student has a target to tackle the IELTS test, they have to make their study plan clearly and do it with the commitment. Then, happiness will come if they can achieve their goal from what they are listed before. Secondly, happiness is not only affected by inside perception but also an external social circle. Some studies said that people who are surrounded by people who have full of happiness will take advantage of always feeling happy because this emotion seems like to influence human thinking.
In conclusion, happiness is a necessary thing that people should take in their minds because this is part of positive emotion. In addition, the most crucial thing is that people should create good planning for their life and be surrounded by happier people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: Although
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.85567010309 441% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 937.175257732 175% => OK
No of words: 333.0 206.0 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91591591592 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50236836477 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.622605031667 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 290.88556701 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7446513574 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2941176471 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5294117647 4.34317383033 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144909502598 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559716704011 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429304841259 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887513832418 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510453708631 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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