Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards declining state of the central memorial. This building has always held an important place in our community and we are all worried about the current condition of the memorial.
Central memorial was built in 1950 to honour our heroes who had sacrificed their lives for freedom of our country. We all have a deeper attachment towards this building as it reminds us of the valiant efforts that were put by people for the liberation of our community. It is a debt which can never be repaid, only thing that can be done from our part is to keep this place in well condition so that next generation can also pay their respect and acknowledge the efforts.
Currently there are many wide cracks in the central foyer which is depleting the central structure and poses a great risk of falling down. Along with the cracks the back wall has fallen which enables street animals to enter the premises and litter all over the ground. Due to lack of maintenance plants are dead, whole area is covered in dust and it has become home for rats and insects.
In order to rectify this situation, a committee should be formed which will look after the maintenance of the memorial. Cleaning team should be dispatched intermediately along with with pest control to control current situation. In addition, back wall should be repaired and a budget should be allocated for weekly maintenance of the park.
If any help is required form our end we as a community are willing to go extra mile to help you restore the central memorial.
I hope you will understand the gravity of the situation and will act accordingly.
Yours Sincerely,
Gunjan Pratap
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 295.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82033898305 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55359331911 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8159267958 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105047208608 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378089963771 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417341965311 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043586542637 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541613371882 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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