You have recently started working in a new company.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letterExplain why you changed jobDescribe your new jobTell him/her your other news

Dear Raj,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and spirits!!!

Its been a long time since we have met and I was eagerly looking forward to meet with you and now a perfect occasion has arrived where we can both enjoy.

A poetry competition is going to be held in my town, and all the finest artist will gather for the event. And make it irresitable for you they are planning to get your favourite poet. The program is scheduled for two days 21st and 22nd March. Whole event is divided in two parts, first day will be for al the local poet and some known personalities will appear to present their work . As you are currently studying literature this even will open a new prospect for you. There will be three poet form your curriculum who will be present on the second day where you can listen them and talk to them after the show. Organisers have also aranged for Q&A round in the evening .

I hope this all gets you on cloude nine and you should be thinking of packing. I have already made arangments for your stay at my home, as mY sister has left for her studies thus i have her room available for your pleasant stay.

I am booking our seats and would love to see you here. Give my love to your mom and dad.

Your's Faithfully,

Gunjan pratap

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...e met and I was eagerly looking forward to meet with you and now a perfect occasion has...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e program is scheduled for two days 21st and 22nd March. Whole event is divided i...
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Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lities will appear to present their work . As you are currently studying literatur...
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Line 7, column 492, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'poet' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'poets'.
Suggestion: poets
...w prospect for you. There will be three poet form your curriculum who will be prese...
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Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...spect for you. There will be three poet form your curriculum who will be present on...
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Line 7, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l be three poet form your curriculum who will be present on the second day where ...
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Line 7, column 673, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lso aranged for Q&A round in the evening . I hope this all gets you on cloude n...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mY sister has left for her studies thus i have her room available for your pleas...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...om available for your pleasant stay. I am booking our seats and would love to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37130801688 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17890820657 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1107783289 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222082379675 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845878514408 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559656308884 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115815310021 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447706778058 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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