Our society has always distinguished people according to their social status and the two extremes are the rich and poor.It has been observed that in recent times the number of millionaires have increased rapidly all over the globe while at the same time we are still far behind in ratio to people living below poverty line. In this essay we will discuss abut the reason of this gap and solutions to bridge the difference between this extremities.
The problem associated with people becoming filthy rich is that they can have an autonomy over the system and can use or mould laws according to their needs and betterment.With the money in hand they can influence government to take measures which may be harmful to society or environment but funds their pocket without worrying about the ramifications.They would be able to control market and make thing costlier which will affect poor and middle class directly without shredding a sweat on their part. In countries like India businessman fund political parties in election and reap the benefits of tax evasion,corruption in quality and bribing officials to take their product to market.
This process creates an imbalance because many local vendors and product owners get thrashed due to competitive rates.
Rectification of this problem can be made by increasing taxes on the rich and changing policies which will help other sections of society.Government should emphasize on educating the weaker section and creating more jobs so that they can become economic stable along with that individuals should also learn to save and invest their earning to create wealth over time.
in conclusion i would say everyone should be aware of their economical status and should thrive to learn different ways of income generation as well as educating themselves so that they will have a sustainable job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17275747508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85217059421 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.312863613 49.4020404114 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.428571429 106.682146367 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160992709487 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749779967547 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668085013007 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830775371815 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482621120517 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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