Advancement in technology and science is the highlight of our generation , we have transcended horizons in terms of inventions and creating business which never existed in earlier century.With respect to old days art was considered as the real treasure among many civilization and some great artists has blessed those generation with their work although with changing times the momentum is shifted towards advanced gadgets that have reshaped our life.
Earlier there were great artist in every filed like picasso in painting, mozart in music aristrocat and many more which have embarked their brilliance in terms of their work and till now it is irreplaceable.But it has been told that every genration has their defining works and at current times internet has taken over that part, we have things which none would have imagined earlier but are present now and making our life easier.It has direct impact on the business as modern day work is transformed by technology and is governed by it.Some of the greatest scientific discoveries were made in 19th or 20th century and therefore people have turned their heads towards the science rather than art.
As we have modernise same should be considered for art, to engage more people into art we have to create a bridge where both art and technology can meet.Awareness about the work of some great artist should be showcased , some kind of activities should be arranged where discussion can be made among attendees and they can learn more about the topic and also share their views.
In conclusion i would say that both are an important aspect of our society art gives us deep prospects into the future increase our imagination and help us to understand life in a different way. On the other hand science and technology help us keep aware and makes us smart but amalgamation of both these things will help us to grow better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9619047619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64894081106 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565079365079 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.340716949 49.4020404114 401% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.6 106.682146367 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 20.7667163134 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157092478438 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798727388886 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439196869479 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924002581534 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405860730813 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 13.0946893788 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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