last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we have been in Italy during our holiday last month. I`m writing to thank you all for sharing some photos of our amazing trip.
It was quit long for me not to travel for any vacation, but our last holiday together was a good relief from work stress. When I decided to travel abroad, I could not have chosen a better company like you. I would like therefore to thank you all for your hospitality of making my accommodation so special.
You know that I was working on an important tender with my company, and I joined the team who worked on the pricing when I arrived immediately. Tender duration was so tight for us all, and we should achieve the due date of submission. Hence, I could not have chance to write you after my arrival the home country.
You will find the weather now in my country fascinating as many tourists from all over the world come in this season. Why do not you visit me and stay couple of weeks to enjoy the landscaping. There are a lot of sight-seeing which are fantastic places to visit if you are interested.
Seeing you soon,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51470588235 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42374574674 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0013640541 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349684209345 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124807020501 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719723889733 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199618354729 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692671353747 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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