last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.2) explain why you didn't wr

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...my dissatisfaction regarding the item i have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ssatisfaction regarding the item i have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Blender from your online store and when i received the product it it ' style...
^
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...e store and when i received the product it it ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...255;'>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51...
^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: was
...5;'>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...pos;>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
^^^
Line 7, column 542, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...apping of the product with pads on side.But it was not even covered properly. ...
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Line 7, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e.But it was not even covered properly. Since, I have not received the desired p...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ave not received the desired product as its a clear negligence from your side.I don...
^^^
Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s its a clear negligence from your side.I donot believe I should be charged for t...
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Line 11, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ve I should be charged for this product.I want full refund of all the money both ...
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Line 11, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... cost or either fix the damage for free.The product code is E4567b6. I want to...
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Line 15, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...e a courier to get this product from me.If you want to book a time to send the cou...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...o hearing from you at he earliest. regards
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44239631336 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73266200105 2.54303337028 147% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.258591502 44.8134815571 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.833333333 76.5299724578 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 16.8248392259 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118002180529 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870953389052 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041861929446 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08038871554 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263616963416 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 8.37731958763 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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