You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell:
– What it was about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers who should attend the course.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my deep appreciation and thanks for giving me the opportunity, to attend the course 'Certified financial planner' at Muscat Training and Conference center.
It was a specialized course, with up-to-date tools and strategies to help finance managers in becoming experts. The course introduces us with the latest methods and software to make financial reports, activity reports, balance sheets to name but a few.
As an accountant, this course broadens my mind and polished my technical skills. I became a financial expert and able to manage all aspects of the work more efficiently and effectively. this course will serve to guide and direct me in the execution of all my upcoming projects.
I would suggest all the members working along with me to take this project. this will improve their knowledge and skills and will help them boost their credibility and prestige within their network.
thank you once again for this referral.
Yours Faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing along with me to take this project. this will improve their knowledge and skills...
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...nd prestige within their network. thank you once again for this referral. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32098765432 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74471405905 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7233345624 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130314389487 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569435156293 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595600948821 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768600990956 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057303914988 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.