Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you want to work there
– What skills and work experience you have
– Inquire about the benefits (salary and hours).
Dear Marry,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you in good health. are you enjoying your job as a network engineer in canada?
I wanted to ask you, to check job opportunities for me in canada, as you are already working there. so, you must have better connections and links. I am very keen to work abroad to boost my resume, to gain experience of working in an international and diverse environment. so that I could become a full rounded employee and grow professionally and personally. Further to this, it will help me in increasing my professional network.
As you know I am CCNA and CCNP certified and working in Omantel as a network engineer for four years. I have good hands-on knowledge of cisco Routers, cisco switches, and cisco real network operating system(ISO.)
having all the technical expertise. I want to land a well-paid job, which could offer me incentives Viz. health insurance, accommodation, free ticket to my country and free training programs.
Looking forward to hearing your response.
Warm Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marry, How are you? Hope this letter finds you ...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...e this letter finds you in good health. are you enjoying your job as a network engi...
^^^
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...nada, as you are already working there. so, you must have better connections and l...
^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... international and diverse environment. so that I could become a full rounded empl...
^^
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...and grow professionally and personally. Further to this, it will help me in increasing ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...sco real network operating systemISO. having all the technical expertise. I want to ...
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Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my country and free training programs. Looking forward to hearing your response...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09248554913 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9304933212 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.802445748 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9285714286 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264417738535 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082013893788 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788173592329 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136354019637 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840649912868 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.