Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you want to work there
– What skills and work experience you have
– Inquire about the benefits (salary and hours).
Dear Ankur,
How're you? I hope you're doing well. I'm just writing to tell you about my plans to move to your country, Australia and I was wondering if you could suggest me the popular jobs there as you are living there for so long.
As you know that there is a high demand for foreign work experience in India, especially in IT. So, I think it'd be a good idea to earn it and broaden my horizons. It'll really help me in the near future when I'll return to my home country. Moreover, foreign workers are earning telephone digit salaries nowadays.
To talk about my expertise, I'm computer literate and I've been working as a software engineer for 5 years. I'm expert in networking and telecom domain, which is an emerging technology and has a great demand in Australia. Please, can you recommend me a few jobs related to this profile?
Last but not least, would you mind suggesting me perks of working there, such as average salary structure and regular working hours in IT jobs. Also, is there a culture of flexible timings and remote working likewise in India? I hope you'll share plenty of information for various jobs.
Write soon and convey my regards to your parents.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, really, so, well, i think, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72769953052 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41187559065 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680751173709 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0302219376 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29347326788 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822935160369 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080928421215 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157025624834 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09547277467 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.