You agreed to take a particular job over the summer, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter including:
– Explaining your situation
– An apology
– Express that you would be interested in the position next summer
I am writing this letter to apologize with regards to the contract of a job, I have agreed upon, for over the summer period, at your orchestra, -Opera music and arts centre located in Sharjah, because of unplanned reason.
To begin with, unfortunately, I will not be able to keep this agreement. I have maternal health issues. As I conceived a week ago. Consequently, I am suffering from extreme nausea, heartburn, and feeling low. Thus, making it difficult for me to fulfill the job responsibility.
I would first like, to sincerely apologize, not only for inconveniencing you, but also failing to pursue this golden opportunity. As I desperately wanted to get experience from your music ensemble.
if you can accept my apology and if there is still an available position sometime in the near future, I would very much like to take on a position. Even if it is unpaid.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
yours faithfully
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reement. I have maternal health issues. As I conceived a week ago. Consequently, I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r me to fulfill the job responsibility. I would first like, to sincerely apologi...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ling to pursue this golden opportunity. As I desperately wanted to get experience ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...erience from your music ensemble. if you can accept my apology and if there ...
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Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d very much like to take on a position. Even if it is unpaid. I look forward to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...hearing from you at the earliest. yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, so, still, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70987654321 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.386642308 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252665923006 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633706369041 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772502625604 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123877934847 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747439282086 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.