Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
In a large number of countries, it can be noticed that students who choose science subject as a major, are not adequate. this essay aims to investigate the factors that lead to this situation. secondly, what impact it has on the society, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several rationales to showing disinterest in science subject by the student. On the first hand, science subjects, being a high level of difficulty, requires a lot of diligence, hard work, as well as a great deal of patience and intelligence. For instance, courses such as biology, chemistry, and physics demands critical thinking along with commitment to the study. Moreover, these subject are time-consuming and challenging, as one have to perform lots of experiments, projects and a lot of research. which in a way discourage students and they tend to select other subjects as a major, to run away from the long hours of labs. secondly, such a subject because of their complexity are extremely competitive and usually have strict academic requirement, so getting into them is not an easy task. Consequently, only a few fraction could make it.
getting down to the impact of shortage of science learners on the society. it could have detrimental effects on the society. Firstly, it will lead to an imbalance in the future workforce as when other subjects, viz. law, business, and economy will become prevalent, hence, causing scarcity of human resource. Furthermore, fewer scientists will lead to fewer technological developments. Thereupon, it would prevent further innovations and improvements in the way of living of the people.
To conclude, students because of the difficulty of the field are reluctant to choose that subject which can hinder the nation by moving forward in science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2252559727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00061924053 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3149876658 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0588235294 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214557207814 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570854555157 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587161370482 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135546517224 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897292259829 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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