Write a letter to your favourite restaurant.Include the following:– Your reason for writing– What you like about the restaurant– Suggestions for improvement

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your favourite restaurant.

Include the following:

– Your reason for writing

– What you like about the restaurant

– Suggestions for improvement

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to express my gratitude for operating such a great establishment, The BBq Tonight located in Qouroum shati Oman.

To begin with, I have been a satisfied customer of you for a couple of years. Whenever I tried something at your restaurant, it has been a wonderful experience. I have almost checked all the entrees from the menu and all are very delicious. Mainly, the chicken karahi, which, I love the most. Please, never change the recipe of that karahi.

Furthermore, the service, the decor, the interior, everything is just perfect. Potted plants and calligraphy paintings are just adding more beauty to the place. On top of that, the ocean view is heart whelming.

But, I was wondering if you can consider my suggestion of, encouraging the er to be more interactive with the customers. For instance, helping to seat female customers, suggesting appropriate choices for young patrons, if there is no children menu offered.

I hope the aforementioned feedback will help you improve the service quality. Looking forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no children'?
Suggestion: there are no children
...propriate choices for young patrons, if there is no children menu offered. I hope the aforeme...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., if there is no children menu offered. I hope the aforementioned feedback will ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, for instance, to begin with, with regard to, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1847826087 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89669324542 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728260869565 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7774420741 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3846153846 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23192621116 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633004514263 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605098882861 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811840267287 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583281707045 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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