You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
– Thank him/her for the good time you had.
– Describe your watch.
– Tell your friend what would you like him/her to do with it if he/she finds it.
Dear Marry,
Hope you are doing great. I am still relishing the pleasant memories, we had together during my visit at your house last weekend.
And thank you for such warm hospitality. I just loved the food that your mama had prepared for me. But unfortunately, I have left my watch at your house and I have a strong reason to believe that, because I remember, while going to the swimming area of your house, I dropped it on tv lounge table and then left your house from the backyard.
it is a leather-covered and blue plated watch with a sliding buckle, square-shaped dial and the dial has roman numbers.I bought it from Timex Expedition and its model is SKMEI 1238. I just recently bought it is very close to my heart.
I want you to search for my watch at your place, specifically in the tv lounge area. And if you find it, just make a call and I will collect it from you while returning home from office.
I look forward to hearing from you.
warm regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Marry, Hope you are doing great. I am still rel...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng my visit at your house last weekend. And thank you for such warm hospitality...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...left your house from the backyard. it is a leather-covered and blue plated wa...
^^
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ped dial and the dial has roman numbers.I bought it from Timex Expedition and its...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ght it is very close to my heart. I want you to search for my watch at your...
^
Line 17, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. warm regards,
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...ook forward to hearing from you. warm regards,
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51955307263 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51907612327 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8696433675 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335292009298 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119197762628 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771802284105 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182576865074 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985495163738 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.