8. You have had problems with a changing room in a sports center. You have made some complaints but nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the manager stating:
– The issues with the changing rooms
– What has been done about it
– What you want the Manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express dissatisfaction with the changing room in the sports center. Let me elaborate on the situation in more detail.
I am an athlete by profession. I have a swimming competition coming in few days, For which I use to do practice in the sports center. but I am not comfortable with the changing room because whenever I went for changing the dree, something always got missed from the wallet. The condition become worsened, when one day I went to the changing room to change my swimsuit, as it was wet. I hanged up my regular dress on the hanger and went for hand wash. when I came back after washing hands my suit was missing. I had nothing to wear except that wet swimsuit. it was very cold outside, so I got sick.
Since, Than, I have made so many complaints to the sports complex authority, but no one has taken this matter seriously.
I would appreciate if you investigate this issue and take serious action. Also make strict policies regarding changing room.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express diss...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...etition coming in few days, For which I use to do practice in the sports center. bu...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...se to do practice in the sports center. but I am not comfortable with the changing ...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...s on the hanger and went for hand wash. when I came back after washing hands my suit...
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Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...thing to wear except that wet swimsuit. it was very cold outside, so I got sick. ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: Then
... cold outside, so I got sick. Since, Than, I have made so many complaints to the ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: THAN_INTERJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: Then
... cold outside, so I got sick. Since, Than, I have made so many complaints to the ...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ate this issue and take serious action. Also make strict policies regarding changing...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...his issue and take serious action. Also make strict policies regarding changing room...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...to hearing from you at the earliest. regards,
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.671875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67048879733 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7276002765 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0714285714 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256914824563 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725578460993 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651800878127 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13361298066 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423512939957 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.