New parents should attend parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion, supported by examples from your own experience.
it is sometimes argued that, for the better brought up of a child, modern parents are required to take a parenting course. personally, I partly share the same view with this idea. this essay will discuss how it can help parents in raising their offsprings in the forthcoming paragraph, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several rationales to support this point of view. On the first hand, early childcare settings and ways, affect children's long-term development. so, parents as the primary caregivers are required to have necessary babysitting skills, so that they can give their child an effective brought up. For instance, a recent study conducted at Oxford university, recorded that 1 in 3 children would refuse to comply with their parent's rules if they did not agree with them so university, initiated a government level program and lobbied young parents to educate them key parenting techniques. Consequently, that resulted in dramatic improvement in the way parents deals with their pupil and in the behavior of offsprings. Secondly, child who grow-up under proper parental care, posses best personality traits, viz. positive character, optimism, confidence, discipline, self-direction, communication skills.
On the contrary, if parents are not enough trained to raise the pupils effectively. Then, offspring may lack in their ability to deal with life problems. Moreover, such children are more prone to failure as the upbringing method of caregivers was not as effective.
To conclude, I am inclined to restate that such positive steps are required and should be taken to see better developmental outcomes in the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42911877395 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95829607804 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670498084291 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7900583639 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234402998578 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712257879508 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042571290531 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122276002674 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607085757876 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.