You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:– Describe what you left and where it happened.– Why are these papers important?– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Essay topics:

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:

– Describe what you left and where it happened.

– Why are these papers important?

– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle from your fleet on 29 Oct 2019. To be more specific, from Alkhoud to qoroum shatti started around 4 pm and finishing after 30 minutes.

While on the way, I was reviewing some contract documents, which I had to deliver to my manager at his house in qoroum shatti where I was headed to. But unfortunately, upon reaching the destination, I left a w of those contractual papers in the cab and as soon as I realized the cab was gone already.

However, I am much worried, because the document was evidence of partnership with the multinational company Omental as these documents were of extreme importance and confidential because of their nature. If the documents fell into wrong hands there could be profoundly serious implications against me and your company as well.

Having said that, I want to take this matter into your hands, and to instruct the cab driver to return those documents as soon as possible.

Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

regards

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this in regards to a recent...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle fr...
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Line 19, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you at the earliest. regards
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...earing from you at the earliest. regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76749629208 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6009544223 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123393137808 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045991351941 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303565858054 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586012312064 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301884555535 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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