Studies have suggested that nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?
To begin with, there are several explanations for the passive routine, that pupils follow nowadays. on the first hand, modern parents, feeling overwhelmed by the responsibilities, let offsprings devote their whole time in front of TV instead of being engaged actively with them. Consequently, making them lack in their ability to think or behave creatively. Secondly, telecast have been growing in number as well as quantity. For instance, children's television programs are being broadcast with addictive and vivid content all day long. The most common example of this are 'Cartoon network' and 'Disney series'.
however, with regard to the question of required measures, a number of definite actions could be taken to motivate children for living an active life. Firstly, caregivers should revise their bringing-up strategy by sparing extracurricular time for the pupils. In addition, academic institutions, apart from study work should dedicate timeslots for youngsters, for creative activities such as innovative experiments, games, writings, and drama competitions. Thereupon, these activities, in the long run, will help children in improving their thinking ability. Lastly, parents should limit the amount of time, a child uses to watch Tv.
To conclude, present-day youth love getting entertained from media and television instead of other activities, there are, however, a number of ways that can be used to divert their minds to other innovative tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65610859729 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93791674565 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710407239819 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0535697879 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.636363636 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9090909091 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168184103211 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548476290111 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403434811132 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10149442691 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619854787993 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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