You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Friend,
Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to give you an exciting news that I am coming to Canada, near you to do an Education degree in music. For this, I require your support.
I am going to join The High school of music to pursue a Master's degree. I have enrolled in the coming spring semester. The course is four years long. All my classes are in the morning and in alternate days. I have free evenings.
I want a part-time job at the earliest. As you know, I am not financially stable. I had applied for need-based fully paid scholarship, but unfortunately did not get the opportunity. So, to meet the living expenditures and the academic fees, I need some source of earning.
As you are already living there. You must have an idea about the local opera music centers, the music ensembles, and the orchestras. it would be your appreciated effort, if you can check them for any part-time job availability. Please, do let me know if you can make it.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Friend, Hope you are doing great. I am writing t...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: exciting news
...t. I am writing this letter to give you an exciting news that I am coming to Canada, near you to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n alternate days. I have free evenings. I want a part-time job at the earliest. ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fees, I need some source of earning. As you are already living there. You must ...
^^
Line 11, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...he music ensembles, and the orchestras. it would be your appreciated effort, if yo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66630249129 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9255130646 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1764705882 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1764705882 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378167833367 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104619058499 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869647136663 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177173675329 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109356975472 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.