Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?
Few people hold the idea that youngsters should render free services for the betterment of the society. personally I share the same views and state that the benefits of such services far outweigh its drawbacks. this essay will first demonstrate the advantages of volunteering work, followed by the analysis of primary disadvantage, and reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, volunteers have a very diverse and deep effect on the society. On the first hand, unpaid workers are the glue that hold the society together. In addition, it improves the social and economic health of the society, by raising educational performance of the youth, solving environmental problems, and responding to climate change. Secondly, unpaid work is a two-way street, as it benefits the individuals in the same way it benefits the society. For instance, helping needy people, without expecting any monetary provides individuals a sense of accomplishment and pride. Moreover, it helps combat depression, since social isolation is one of the main reason of this chronical disease. So when someone goes outside, for community services, he meets with different people sharing a common cause, thus it expands his social circle.
However, on the contrary, those who oppose this say that volunteering can be time-consuming. Although, it gives mental satisfaction, but this giving back strategy may cause you to neglect other important commitments of your life. However, I believe that giving free service improves your personality as an individual as well as it makes society a stronger, cohesive and safer place.
To conclude, I would restate that, pros of charitable work far outweigh its cons and should be promoted and appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42164179104 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96957496511 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9916420046 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205428681624 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585664969458 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460140154397 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106608776964 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455884833348 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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