Government funding in university should only be provided for scholarship for the best student. All other funding can find from student fees and private organizations. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
it is sometimes argued that all the government grants that the university receives should be reserved as a scholarship for the top students and universities can use student fees and private organizations for other fundings. I reckon that the idea of allocating whole government funding for scholarships has flaws. this essay will first discuss this view in the forthcoming paragraph followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several rationales to justify, why all the government grants should not be provided for scholarships for toppers. On the first hand, this will force institutions to increase learners fees, as the income from students and other private organizations would not be enough to cover the cost of university expenses, viz. investing in innovation, training of postgraduate researchers, maintenance and replacement of infrastructure, cost of subjects as some subjects cost more than others, fieldwork, laboratory and studio work. As a result, scholars will become reluctant to take admission to pursue a professional degree because of the high fees of such institutes, especially pupils from less affluent families, who have to weigh for before making any financial decision.
On the contrary, those who oppose this says that allocating full government grant as a scholarship for top students will motivate them to further excel, Besides it will motivate other students also to work hard to achieve those highly paid scholarships. however, I believe, as government funding to university is a huge amount so universities should implement that money in a balanced way.
To conclude, although, scholarships are necessary for competing students, however, I restate that this should not be the sake of other student's higher fees and putting pressure on private organizations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, i reckon, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50714285714 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12115069048 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5723852286 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425934621607 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171662330861 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128790247695 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281453454262 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732769181029 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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