You recently applied for 2 separate jobs.
Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to 1 of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter:
– An apology
– An explanation of your situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter, to apologize with regards to the contract, I have made with you on an interview for selected candidate, at your Orchestra,- opera music and arts centre located in Sharjah.
To begin with, I would first like to sincerely apologize, not only for failing to join your music ensemble, but also missing the chance to get experience from your opera. As I desperately wanted to work under your supervision.
Recently, I got a job confirmation call from The national opera house, where I submitted my CV a month ago. In the meantime, while I was busy completing the HR paperwork requirement at your house, they choose me. Moreover, I prefer that opportunity because it is within the close range from my living place. Hence, considering daily commute, as it is the major cause of concern for me. I must inform you that, I can no longer be able to join you.
my apologies once again I look forward to your acceptance at the earliest.
yours sincerely
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter, to apologize w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sic and arts centre located in Sharjah. To begin with, I would first like to sin...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ance to get experience from your opera. As I desperately wanted to work under your...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, I can no longer be able to join you. my apologies once again I look forward t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...n no longer be able to join you. my apologies once again I look forward to ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... your acceptance at the earliest. yours sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, look, moreover, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73326469564 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706896551724 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4726482467 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245673466986 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085928447888 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795003172417 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135484676024 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06858370904 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.