Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers.
it is often argued that the majority of young students choose to pursue academic studies, thus causing a shortage of workers with specified skills, hence motivation should be given to people to pursue vocational education. Personally, I share the same view with this argument. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument, followed by the reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several rationale to justify this argument. On the first hand, it is important for the economic and social health of the society. To be more specific, many of the skills most needed, to compete in the 21st-century global competition, require skilled labor workforce, as all the fieldwork is vocational and technical in nature. For instance, the U.S economy has risen dramatically, just because it is creating challenging, highly skilled and well-paid jobs only for those workers, who are able to perform them. consequently, the U.S manufacturing business is growing and modernizing and hence they are well-developed in terms of sanitary and electricity system. Secondly, this will help those learners who are keen to pursue their desired career but are condemned just because of status quo bais, that restricts parents to motivate their children only for a white-collar job.
however, on the contrary, those who oppose this, consider blue-collar job as low wage and non- professional job. So to maintain or upgrade their status such guardians, force their children to go for academic professions. however, I believe the absence of excellence in many technical and vocational fields is costing us economically.
To conclude, I would restate that, for the betterment of society, more and more adults should be encouraged towards vocational training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41605839416 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95553069732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7079545198 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212231261167 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611407471527 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065851335296 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131772121381 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455855653839 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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