Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. In the letter:
– Explain why you would like to move
– Request that your employer place you in a specific city
– Request that it be completed by a certain date
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to make a request, to issue my transfer from local orchestra, -opera music and arts centre to its branch located in, a town in the rolling countryside of south-west england.
To begin with, I am farwah ahmad. I have been a loyal employer of yours for over 12 years. Currently, I am serving as the chief conductor at your centre, and living in a hostel near the opera centre. I am suffering from swear stomach disorder, gastropathy. In consequence, I am unable to eat from hostel mess or street food as it is very spicy, hence further affecting my health.
I am in great trouble. Would you be kind enough to make my transfer, to you opera branch located in the village of cheddar, south-west england, As it is nearby residence of my parents.
I plea to confirm it on the weekend dated 9 Oct 2019. So that I could easily manage and shift to that place.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest, hoping that you accept my request.
Yours Sincerely
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5624357559 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4985885114 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208145960503 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646239306467 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613349877926 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104601394994 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464557941567 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.