1. You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should:
– Describe the course you are taking.
– Explain what you don’t like about the course.
– Give your opinion about what should be done about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with regards to the English language course, to which I am currently enrolled, at your language-plus school.
I am farwah ahmad and currently pursuing a part-time course of advance level at your district. I have 2 lessons per day, each of 45 minutes and a total of 5 per week.
However, I am not satisfied with the course. On the first hand, the teacher focuses more on the transmission of theoretical knowledge instead of the practical aspect of the subject. For instance, course structure is such that, we are not given any exercises to practice even the fundamentals of the language, viz. grammar, conversation, and vocabulary.
I would suggest that instructor should allow group discussion regarding reading, writing, listening and speaking aspects of the language. Further to this, I would recommend that there must be a classroom response system so that learners can actively participate during the lecture.
I would be grateful if you could consider my suggestions.
regards,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enrolled, at your language-plus school. I am farwah ahmad and currently pursuing...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...urse of advance level at your district. I have 2 lessons per day, each of 45 minu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f 45 minutes and a total of 5 per week. However, I am not satisfied with the cou...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...g and speaking aspects of the language. Further to this, I would recommend that there m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...f you could consider my suggestions. regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45294117647 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09843693153 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.897807883 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170612395632 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523843500483 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536083390467 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827094738118 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497746967123 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.