last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Ram,
I am doing great and hope you are sailing in the same boat. Last week, I received your mail containing the photographs of our vacation, so, I am writing to express my extreme pleasure for organising the awesome trip and the photos.
I was planning to write you from the moment I reached home but unfortunately, my sister met with an accident and I had to take her to hospital as, all of our family members have went to visit my grandmother. Only yesterday, she got discharged from the hospital and finally, I got free and I decided to write.
I am really thankful for the wonderful hospitality and experience. I got to know from one of our friend that you are coming to my town next weekend, so, I want you to come visit me and if you have not booked any place to stay, then, it would be really great if you stay with me at my place.
I am hoping for the positive response from your side.
Best Regards,
Rupali Mahajan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
...ital as, all of our family members have went to visit my grandmother. Only yesterday...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eat if you stay with me at my place. I am hoping for the positive response fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38068181818 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51528770967 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.802287749 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225095034424 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849467902212 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550017829093 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136866103272 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433361748227 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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