Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Mary and Monica,
Thank you so much for sending me those fantastic photos of our holiday in Bali. Honestly, it was the most memorable holiday with you guys. I absolutely enjoyed every moment there. All those road trips when we went to see sightseeings and these nice relaxing moments on the beach while we got tanned. Oh, and I still can't hold myself back laughing about those monkeys who came to pull Monica's glasses off, luckily we got them later back.
Anyway, it's really hard to be back after being three weeks away. I have been so busy with work to catch up everything that I haven't even find time to write to you. I'm really glad to keep those photos as a memory and will probably print some off and put them on my wall.
I actually miss you a lot and was wondering maybe you would like to come to Australia to my place for a week or two and I could show you around Melbourne? Let me know what you think.
Hoping to see you soon,
Victoria
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mary and Monica, Thank you so much for sending me those f...
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Line 11, column 317, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ch while we got tanned. Oh, and I still cant hold myself back laughing about those m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es off, luckily we got them later back. Anyway, its really hard to be back after...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...with work to catch up everything that I havent even find time to write to you. Im real...
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Line 15, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... havent even find time to write to you. Im really glad to keep those photos as a m...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Hoping to see you soon, Victoria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, honestly, may, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53591160221 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08806159415 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.729281767956 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4233792103 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262944924607 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955738305421 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806382311381 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123500176976 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679228493651 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.