Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• apologise for not meeting him/her
• explain why you did not contact him/her earlier
• suggest a time and place to meet in the future
Dear Michael,
I am writing this letter to apologize for not meeting you last month. I was excited for our startling plan but I feel terrible that I could not make it up.
As I told you, it was a business trip which had a crucial deal needed to be accomplished. Fortunately, the meeting was successful, and as per the plan I was about to come to you; however, the client called for an urgent presentation about the company that I could not left. Therefore, I could not get time to come to the decided venue. Besides, the meeting was so abrupt that I could not even inform you in advance.
Furthermore, I have another meeting scheduled with the same organization next week in the same town, but only for two hours. I promise that I would meet you on the next Tuesday evening in the Southern mall. I am looking forward to spend great time with you.
Thanks,
Chirag
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...tion about the company that I could not left. Therefore, I could not get time to com...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to spending'.
Suggestion: to spending
...the Southern mall. I am looking forward to spend great time with you. Thanks, Chirag...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48125 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54858263305 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3014184159 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279516773007 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112057735199 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992700379925 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200436533813 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349712835829 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.