Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While many people opine that it is appropriate to accept severe consequences such as a toxic work or poor lifestyle, others believe that it is significant to work hard to overcome repercussions and dwell a pleasant life. This essay shall elucidate both the views and give its perspective.
A person settling with present terrible situation would have consistent life issues and same lifestyle. Since an individual would never strive for success, he would not upgrade in life and encounter similar challenges several times. Moreover, he would struggle with his job and never be contented with his work life. Thus, he might face financial problems in the future and would think twice before spending money. For instance, several people do not study hard in educational institutions and become unsuccessful in their career, which leads to living a miserable life where they are hardly able to have food and shelter.
There are enormous individuals who strive hard for their life and earn a luxurious lifestyle. Many foster themselves to study for higher qualification to prosper in their career and get a high level designation; thus, earning a huge income and living an affluent lifestyle. For example, pupils from marginalized section study tremendously and flourish in their life that enables them to ameliorate their circumstances and live a comfortable life. Therefore, struggle is an intrinsic component of prosperity and abiding a satisfied life.
To conclude, both trajectories have their own concerns and outcomes, which could be problematic at various platforms. However, people must try to work beyond the comfort zone and improve their situation by putting strenuous efforts so that they could have happiness and comfort in their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35507246377 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8585004801 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0149113889 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115935039988 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426520507876 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378548610277 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819878340738 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542237468703 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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