Some people believe that lt Is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that It Is better to try and Improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that dealing with a bad situation, such as low paid or unsatisfactory job, is the best strategy,but orders suggest that individuals should strive to achieve their goals.
Sometimes accepting unpleasant situations in a job ,for example, helps us to gain more in other aspects of our lives. In this case, a person May ease the heavy burden of responsibility on his shoulder, but improves other aspects of his life. For example, I had to limit my appointments with patients in my dental clinic because I acqupied myself with an exam to continue dentistry in an advanced level.Moreover, it is hard to change some unwanted situations. providing the best condition possible is to accept fate and being patient until the right time comes; in other words, the best decision results from miserable moments we experience in bad days of Our Lives.
On the other hand, people have to strive to create a better life for themselves. Having a sense of achievement not only gives them happiness and rejoice in life but also encourages them to seek prosperity and victory in their lives. so they may present clear goals and fight for them. Besides, fighting for a better situation will make individuals feel more confident about themselves. Whenever they try and fail they try other ways to overcome the problem and this process would make a man stronger and smarter so they have these tools to fight for what they want and succeed in life .
In conclusion, people experience so many ups and downs in their lives. as I'm a kind of person who urges for more challenges and not afraid of facing with obstacles in my life. I think fighting against the bad situations and change them into acceptable ones is a better strategy .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nto acceptable ones is a better strategy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73044510607 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.2290732334 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216635204083 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747245046288 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589415345323 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133042707079 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434262674899 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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