Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?
Advertising is always considered when it comes to selling a product to the desired customers. Mediums, such as radio and television, are most commonly used to disseminate the details of offers. However, I agree with the statement that advertisement tends to focus more on sale of quantity instead of focusing on a product’s quality.
Advertisement is used when organisations offer goods at discounted price or to encourage people to buy in bulk at a cheaper price. Attracting people by offering products at a lower price if bought in much quantity helps increase the sales of the product. In addition, companies offer monthly instalment option so that people can buy impulsively. In this way, advertisement is used to spread such offers which attract most people. For example, Amazon India offers products at reasonable prices when customers buy in bundles.
Furthermore, people forget about the quality of the particular product and buy commodities without a second thought. These results motivate firms to produce goods with a compromised quality to sell it at a lower price by offering such offers. Consequently, people buy products, but are of very poor quality that may harm their health too. To illusrate, Pepsi, sold packs of cans with a 40 per cent dicount because of the poor quality, which caused many people to suffer with a hazardous infection.
To conclude, Advertising, these days, are used with an aim to maximize the sales of products by giving attracting offers to the audience. However, the quality of goods is awful, which should be fixed to avoid any severe consequences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16538461538 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92292256677 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.2697974295 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117866855582 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456620772926 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335175027391 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704394084183 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262845263704 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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