Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children’s growth is essential for their career and a better future. According to a research, offsprings learn faster than young people because they have a fresh brain that can even remember moments for a long time. Some people think that parents have a vital role in a child’s evolvement; however, others say that things like television or friends have a crucial role in a pupil’s development. This essay would discuss both sides and give its opinion.
Undoubtedly, parents are the first teacher of children because they spend most of their time with each other. It is certain that a child speaks the first word, and learn how to walk with the help of their parents. Similarly, a part of education, such as reading, is taught by the parents that are further polished in schools. Moreover, a pupil adapt the behaviour of parents as he spends much time with his parents. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar’s son is the captain of Indian cricket team, and he gives the credit to his father as he grew watching his father playing cricket. Therefore, children live with their family in the initial phase of their life, and learn many things which help them in their future.
Children, on the other hand, spend most time of their life with their friend, and also devote much time watching television shows. Kids make friends in school, and talk to them the most while in the school. Additionally, they watch their favourite shows on television when they are back home from school. Furthermore, technology advancements have helped develop more sources of entertainment such social media and online web-series platform. Therefore, talking to friends has become convenient, and watching shows and series has evolved as the best medium of entertainment. Thus, television and friends have the crucial influence on children as they spend a lot time with them.
In my perspective, television and friends are more influencing to children than parents because they devote much time watching shows on television, and interact with friends very often. Besides, parent do not have enough time to give to their children due to their responsibilities.
To conclude, friends and entertainment souce such as television affects children more than their parents. However, parents should always keep an eye on their children growth and behaviour to ensure they learn good things.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14507772021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70091853608 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515544041451 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6342087762 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24752445842 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807707831938 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912538009437 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153635211466 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101936739893 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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