Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Many sports have been introduced to people in the last few decades. Even though some activities could be life threatning, people still like to be a part of them. I intend to delve into the reasons why individuals love such extremely dangerous sports, and what can be done to deal with the dangers associated with it.
A fundamental reason for the interest in such dangerous games is that some people are adventurous who want to experience some challenging tasks in their life. They look for activites which are full of difficulties and take courage to accomplish. Moreover, some want to experience how it feels when a person is doing a dangerous but a distinct activity; for example, people want to do the paragliding to know how it feels to fly in the sky, no matter how difficult and risky is it. Therefore, people like such dangerous sports and take part to explore it that can be a memorable moment for the rest of therir life.
As there is a higher risk of accidents in such sports, there is a need of consideration of some safety measurements. Everyone’s life is significant, and it is essential to prevent repercussions that can happen due to the life-threatning sports. Since, many sports are outdoor activities, weather may play a vital role when it comes to the precautions of the sports. Besides, the higher quality of products involved in sports can help in carrying out such activities successfully. For instance, boating should be available when the flow of water is normal and the boat is capable of carrying a number of people, and it cannot be damaged by anything. Consequently, the danger involved in such sports may decrease, hence people could be confident while being a part of it.
To conclude, although people like to take part in some dangerous sports because of the challenges and hurdles it offer, safety measurements are necessary to put in place to avoid any kind of unwelcomed consequence it may create.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'offers'?
Suggestion: offers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85542168675 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91193877498 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6766996018 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407661352207 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134267323716 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922255381295 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26989532299 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898424393646 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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