The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter
• describe the changes
• explain how that will affect you
• say how you would like the service to be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your proposal to change the timetable of buses in my town.
The appointed council published the new changes recently which I am not accepting it. The new schedule of my regular bus where crosses directly in front my house has changed. However I was waking up early to catch it up, new schedule does not have the morning route any more. I tried to double check with the council customer service, but no one picked up my call.
New schedule will tremendously effect on my daily commuting to work as it is the only available local transport service. Although I own a car, I would prefer to go to work by bus. In addition, any other means will be taking longer route that I cannot absorb.
Instead of changing the time of buses, I would suggest that you put more focus on buses enhancement. For example, many new buses are supplied with the internet service and TV. These kind of facilities improve the service among the commuters. Please consider my advise in before taking any decision.
I look forward for your revised proposal.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...directly in front my house has changed. However I was waking up early to catch it up, n...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...call. New schedule will tremendously effect on my daily commuting to work as it is ...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...plied with the internet service and TV. These kind of facilities improve the service among...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...among the commuters. Please consider my advise in before taking any decision. I loo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57815792295 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676767676768 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5252203461 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112837561366 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361659993127 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413948623297 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587102359055 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403246720236 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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