You bought a ticket to music concert. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Tell your friend the details about the concert.
Explain why you are unable to go.
and explain how your friend could receive your ticket
Dear Kareem,
It`s been so long since we met last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to offer you a ticket for a music concert in celebration of the national day next month.
You know that the government celebrates every year the Independence Day, and they show this year a concert where a lot of known musicians play the national music at the main Opera hall. It will be held on 18th September at 9:00 PM, but you must arrive early at Opera entrance for the check-in procedure and security arrangement checks.
You may know that my company has just signed a contract with an important client in China, and I have been nominated with the team who will travel to Beijing to negotiate the contract`s term and condition next month. Therefore, I won`t be available in the country to attend then the concert show.
I may not have enough time to give you the ticket personally; however, I left it with my neighbor under your name. You can catch him up at any time before the concert day to take the ticket. I hope that you will enjoy the celebration and the music.
Warms regards,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, then, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65024630542 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51365751838 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3616879814 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255083664884 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103114335668 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900783408149 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166724770936 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927805104829 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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