You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotelWrite a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter1-Say where you think you left the papers2-Explain why they are so impor

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter

1-Say where you think you left the papers
2-Explain why they are so important
3-Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I forgot some documents at your hotel after I returned from the meeting yesterday.

My company had an important meeting with one of our international clients, and it was held at the main conference room. When the meeting was over, we had a quick early dinner at the restaurant in the lobby. I must have left those papers in one of these locations where we stayed. The documents are filled in a blue file with a plastic cover.

I was the coordinator of the meeting, and I was noting down all minutes. However, soft copies are available into my laptop, those are original papers and have all signatures and stamps. It contains also confidential information related to our core business. The loss of such papers results in a huge disturbance to my current position in the company.

We realized that some security cameras were available at both locations. I would therefore request that you review the footage which were recorded during the meeting and dinner time, and that you check where are those documents left. It will be very helpful if you allowed me to watch the recordings to assist you and your team.

I look forward to the papers being returned.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81018518519 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59063666299 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4662656722 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2142857143 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317168999644 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855242803081 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964710077183 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159775936149 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133486280298 0.0580467560999 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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