Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Global tourism, a widely accepted as a significant factor to country`s development, is a heated-up issue. Recently, the tourism between countries is considered as the main industry; but it can also introduce conflict between nations of different background. I partially agree of the opinion for the importance of the tourism to the country, but there are some measurable clashes. This essay will discuss, firstly, the tourism from industrial point of view, and secondly, its detrimental effects on nations, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, many countries depend on the tourism as a main channel of funding their economy, and the increase number of tourists reflects a healthy economy. However, the poor countries do not have the enough resources to secure the basic needs for nation; they allocate a considerable amount of fund in the sightseeing and attraction. As result, many travelers are being seduced to travel and visit the country to bring foreign currency. For instance, although countries where located in South Africa are considered the poorest comparing to others, their main income from tourism and recreational activities.
However, frequent foreigners to the country could have a negative impact due to several differences on their background. The conflict may occur from simple things such as the way of dressing or different behavior and attitude which may be abnormal in the country. In addition, residents get stressed during the peak season of tourism to their country, the country by then be over occupied, and heavy traffic is measured. For example, some cities, where located on shore, are suffered during summer from tourists, and the rate of clashes is rising up during this period from local residents.
To sum up, it is undeniable that tourism is the core industry of any nation to booth its economy, but it is the individual and government responsibility to defuse any conflict.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30194805195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88228862269 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8291201435 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.615384615 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167827147588 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061596796664 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378936946917 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103907206639 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570745239152 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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