nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world.unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today development of tourism industry is an effective method which can be beneficial for every country and government. This method like any activity has some pros and cons which I think the pros are more significance. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint some profits and also some disadvantages of this subject.
First, tourists are beneficial economically for country. They use the tourism attractions of country like historical places, buy souvenir and local products, use accommodations and public facilities which brings money to a country. For instance, governments compete with each other to get international tournaments hosting like football world cup. Although, the host of matches spend immense budget for preparation, they earn more money by tourists who come and watch these tournament at stadium.
Second, the global reputation of country in some aspects like medical equipment and skilled physicians or high educational level can attract foreigners as international students or patients. This method not only have financial advantages, but also can help effective interactions between countries. I thinks it can be like exchange of goods. For example, one country can take advantages of medical or educational facilities and the other can take advantages of natural resources like fossil fuels.
On the other hands, some people believe that extension of tourism industry can have some disadvantages like increased traffic and environmental contamination, destruction of the pristine nature of an area and security problems. But, in my point of view, government can control these losses by laying down some rules.
To wrap it up, tourism industry have some significant profits for country beside some harmful effects which, governments can take advantages of them by management of pros and cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this tournament' or 'these tournaments'?
Suggestion: this tournament; these tournaments
...re money by tourists who come and watch these tournament at stadium. Second, the global re...
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Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ctive interactions between countries. I thinks it can be like exchange of goods. For e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61151079137 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03772665673 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7482783462 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780485815567 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288044138432 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319455145116 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487408331957 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116834960352 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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