You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag Though you filled your claim to Lost and Found Department you have not received your bag yet In your letter 1 write the details of incident 2 inquire the status of your lost bag to airline 3 tell wha

Essay topics:

You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.

In your letter:-

(1) write the details of incident.
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline.
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regards to my filled application for my bag that it got lost while travelling on the plane last week.
I have submitted a claim to `Lost and Found Department` to report the incident, but no action has been taken till date. My luggage was checked-in with evidenced boarding pass; however, I did not receive it on the arrival destination. I was waiting for it on the luggage belt along with same flight`s bags, but It was not among them.

I have called your office on several occasions, but no response from them. Therefore, I would request that you inform me with the outcomes of my claim application and if you have any updates about my lost bag from `Lost and Found Department`. This will be highly appreciated by me.

I have a travel insurance with your company, and your policy states that all lost items are covered. Hence, I would ask that you review the value of estimated cost of bag and other belongings, and that you process it with your accounts department to release the cheque as soon as possible.

Please let me know if you need any further information.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 9.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82673267327 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85746502378 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6485214717 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430579973709 0.216113520407 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14580737269 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103722213384 0.0603063233224 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205613651809 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115700975636 0.0580467560999 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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