There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country.
Write him/her a letter and invite your friend,
- Explain what happens at the party,
- Describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country,
- Say why it is important for your friend to be there.
Dear Simoni
It`s been long since we saw each other. I hope that you and your family are all well! I`m writing to invite you to attend a forthcoming national event of Egypt, the Independence Day, next month.
The ceremony will be held exactly on October 6th, and the national party organizes big celebrations over the country, especially in the huge squares, attending by all inhabitants. Although it will be in mid of the week, all companies give a payable leave for their employees. People can enjoy the festive environment by a lot of well-organized military shows in the streets.
Egypt was acquired for more than 60 years by Briton, and we got our independence on October 6th after enormous revolutions for 12 consecutive days. However, there were deadly street-fights against soldiers, we won at the end. Egyptian government decided to celebrate this special day in memorial of the people who paid their lives for their country.
There are a lot of interesting shows and historical footage in that day, and I know that you are interested in historical events. I would therefore suggest that you attend to know how Egyptian history is extremely rich and honorable.
Seeing you soon.
Tom
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08457711443 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84823154955 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6686607836 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126224991229 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430143351845 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480620222047 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725990707458 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552405633238 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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