You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
1- give details of your study plans
2- explain why you want to get a part-time job
3- suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Johnny,
It`s been so long since we met last month. I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to help me in finding a part-time job in your country where I will move next month for completing my post-graduate studies.
My study plans are put with one of the reputable universities in your country, and you know it very well. When I decided to choose one college, I could not find better than your university. The courses run for almost two years continues, and I will be barely have time to rest.
The college fees are affordable, but I need your assistance to find me a part-time job within the main city to fund my living and rental expenses. Therefore, your help will be much appreciated. The job should be at night-shift to focus on the morning only on my lectures at university.
I know that you have many connections among the multinational companies, hence I would be grateful if you send my Resume to one of those. You can check with your company human resources department if there is an opportunity meets my qualifications.
Warm regards,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
.... You can check with your company human resources department if there is an opportunity m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72916666667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81912799264 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6957928644 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5454545455 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285136042537 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990696432936 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747657703092 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176939609862 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355498630692 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.