You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Johnny,
It`s been so long since we met last month. Everything should be fine since you have returned to your native suburb in England. I`m writing to inform you that I have just moved to a new house in the city center.
Although I was happy with my old house, I had a rental problem with my previous house lord. I decided to move to a new bigger house, when he had informed me with the increase of the monthly rent. However, I did have money to fund the full payment for my new house, I took a mortgage from the bank. Mortgage documentation were a lot, but my family was very supportive to take this step. The new house is a fantastic accommodation, it is also accommodated all my family.
You know that my family is quit big, therefore I chose a large house with two floors, one big kitchen and garden where my kids will be having enough area to play with their peers. My wife is also fascinated with the living room decoration.
One day, you should come and visit us. I am inviting you to come for two days and stay with us any time of the year. It will be good chance to see my family after long time and for sure the new house.
Seeing you,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3125 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28946051818 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611607142857 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8951783114 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212844054238 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828144411744 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665143341952 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13094640435 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585356036111 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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