You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to put an official complain to you for some furniture that I received them at home damaged by your company.
Delivered items are a big coach, four chairs and tea table. When I made a booking with your company, I was amazed to know that your company can deliver such big furniture. Long coach with special side stands is three seated, and four chairs are relatively small but extremely heavy. There was available space in the tuck; therefore, I decided to send also the tea-table in the same delivery order.
I have booked a door-to-door delivery service, and the offer was very interesting for that long distance. When the order has arrived, I found out that there are some serious scratches on the chairs, and one leg of the coach is broken. These items have a considerable amount of money; hence, your action is required.
I took comprehensive insurance policy with your company, and my policy states that all items are covered. Therefore, I would ask that you address this matter personally with your insurance department and that you review the attached invoices of all damaged items to be reimbursed.
I look forward to receiving the money back of all damaged items.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ged items. Yours faithfully, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59092399511 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9879366817 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224142556515 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676676139167 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556480414324 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109261714152 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718864348434 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.