Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from and it get damaged.
1) Apologize for damaging the product
2) Explain what happened
3) Say how are you going to fix the issues.
Dear John,
I hope you and your family are well! I`m writing to let you know that the kitchen appliance which I borrowed from you got damaged last week while using it.
I know that you have just bought the blender, and it was a brand-new device. When I borrowed it, I did not expect that it would damage due to my wrong usage. I would like that you accept my apologies for that unwanted situation.
I tried to switch it ON after connecting it to the power supply, but it did not work. The instruction manual of the blender states that power supply should be 230 Voltage though an adapter; however, I connected it directly to a higher power supply which is 415 Voltage. This is the reason why the blender`s motor got damaged.
I have cash voucher from one shop where in city center, and it sells appliances including the kitchen items which are made by a reputable manufacturer. The cash voucher can cover the full cost of one new blender. Therefore, I would like that you accept it from me to buy a new device instead of the faulty blender.
Seeing you soon,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55329949239 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4331935451 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1253528483 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207054722145 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767421102637 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675815617674 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125655918992 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850015048257 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.