Write a letter to a friend.you have borrowed something from and it get damaged.
1) Apologize for damaging the product
2) Explain what happened
3) Say how are you going to fix the issues.
Dear John,
I hope you and your family are well! I`m writing to let you know that the kitchen appliance which I borrowed from you got damaged last week while using it.
I borrowed last week the blender which you have just bought during your last trip in United Kingdom, and it was a brand-new device from a reputable make. When I borrowed it, I tried to use it once and it damaged due to my wrong usage. Please accept my apologies for the unwanted current situation.
I tried to switch the mixer ON after connecting it to the power supply, but it did not work at all. The instruction manual of the blender states that power supply should be connected only to 230 Voltage though a special adaptor; however, I connected it directly to a higher power supply with 415 Voltage. This is the reason why the blender`s motor got burnt out.
I have cash voucher from one shop where in the city center, and it sells appliances including the kitchen items. You can reimburse the full cost of a new blender by this cash voucher. Therefore, please accept it to buy a new device instead of the faulty blender.
Seeing you soon,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62926829268 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38612886196 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7952102192 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184329729241 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654980058646 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652664891848 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114414908763 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878370725906 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.