You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have forget some important documents while my recent visit to your reputable hotel for a business meeting with one of my clients.

The papers must have been left in the room where we had the meeting. I could only assume that it either was dropped beneath the table or had been covered under one of the table sheets. My bag had many files, but it did not include those important documents.

If I have another copy from those papers, I would not be worried. Therefore, those papers are so important as it was original, and it will be very difficult to issue it again from the local authorities. You may know that how difficult it is nowadays. The procedure of issuing an original document may take two consecutive months.

The booking reference number of that meeting is WDCRX on 2nd July, and I would request if you could be able to help me to find those important papers. You can retrieve the footage from the security cameras while the meeting was running.

I look forward to receiving my papers as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
... I am writing to inform you that I have forget some important documents while my recen...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ery difficult to issue it again from the local authorities. You may know that how...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eference number of that meeting is WDCRX on 2nd July, and I would request if you ...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...I would request if you could be able to help me to find those important papers. You can retriev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65151515152 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44275862229 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8580322301 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234552181805 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738473635239 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668637789641 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116749452713 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683454782911 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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