You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait ]
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to put an official complain for not getting my cheque book that I ordered from your bank two weeks ago.
My company is registered in your bank`s VIP list, and they have opened for me a current account over two years for my salary transfer. When I mad the request online through the internet banking application, I was informed that it would take only three working days. The request status is still under process, and no update till date on my application.
I have contacted the customer service department on several occasions to report the delay, but nothing has been done. They informed me that some approvals are still required; however, my earlier application for similar service did not take that much duration. Please advise me with the remaining process and its duration till receiving the cheque book at my address.
I selected the fast-track service while I was applying for the cheque book. This service states that any delay would be reported to the customer immediately; hence, I would ask that you address this matter personally, and ensure that it is treated in priority with the concerned department.
I look forward to the cheque being received.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rted to the customer immediately; hence, I would ask that you address this matter...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03381642512 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6088566778 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661835748792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6959349486 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20773087985 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697056560359 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608487850946 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117948358571 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783677306419 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.